All main lines must have exta lines.

When retouching the lines the skin should be pulled open so that the blade hits the line perfectly.

Lowe lines can be long, however never that long, those should be divided into parts Light microblading style. 

You are elevated to next level.

There are still mistakes.

1. Some of the lines may be too deep.

2. Some of the upper lines are a bit too long.

3. The brow should be filled more.

4. The end of the brow (pt 6 area) should be thinner and sharper.

You have been elevated to the next level - this work is very good. 

There are some minor mistakes: 

1. There should be better symmetry regarding lower extra lines.
2. There can not be such a long last upper line! Please make 2-3 shorter upper lines instead of that. 
3. Every main line should have its own extra line!
4. Some upper lines are too long!

Please also become familiar with the principles of Light microblading because there are lots of changes! This is an excellent work of the previous era of microblading.