5619340045 December 11, 2017 16:08
Based on the brow on the left - it can be accepted.
Still three minor mistakes:
1. The longest line of the transition should end closer to the starting point of the first upper line.
2. The last of the upper lines should never get outside the borders of the brow. All upper lines must remain inside the brow borders.
3. All starting points of the upper lines should remain inside the borders of the brow - not ON those (but INSIDE those).