587568316495 November 16, 2018 05:55
This is really good. However, to get passes the following should be taken into account:
1. The lower lines should always be bent on top of the back bone. At the moment the tips are facing too upwards.
2. Extra lines should always connect to the end points of the main lines (at the moment those connect too early).
3. Lowe lines starting points symmetry is missing. Starting points should be symmetrical and not wary. It also seems that some of the extra lines are missing to lower main lines.
4. In the tail section of the brow all lines should be directed towards point no 3. At the moment some of those are directed too low.
5. Upper line symmetry is too much different. The staring points should be symmetrical.
Otherwise really really good progress!