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   November 9, 2018 07:24

As a whole this pattern looks nice and can be passed. However, there are some quite important mistakes.

- Symmetry problems between lower main lines.

- Some of the upper extra lines are too short.

- Upper lines can shorten after pt np 2. 

- There should ne nicely curved lines in the beginning.

- The tail section should be closed with lines coming from within the brow, not some extra lower-lines.

Still, as has been said, the overall pattern looks ok.