6465240333 November 9, 2018 07:24
As a whole this pattern looks nice and can be passed. However, there are some quite important mistakes.
- Symmetry problems between lower main lines.
- Some of the upper extra lines are too short.
- Upper lines can shorten after pt np 2.
- There should ne nicely curved lines in the beginning.
- The tail section should be closed with lines coming from within the brow, not some extra lower-lines.
Still, as has been said, the overall pattern looks ok.